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    Rioshi [BD Format]

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    Post by Rioshi Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:29 pm

    Just so that it doesn't look like Im getting any special treatment, remade the profile to match the template. Just more the old one into character development

    I AM Machine Heart Waltzing with Death

    Basic Information:

    Human Name:
    Rioshi Nobunaga
    Shinigami Name: The Machine Heart
    Gender: Male
    Age: [Appearance Age 20] {{Actual Age 7,400}}
    Division: 12th
    Rank: Currently Captain
    Residence: The Scientist's Manor
    Appearance: 6'4 and with a cheerful demeanor belying an almost sly personality, the cheerful cane sword of this man can always be heard tapping softly against the shoulder blade of his left arm. His hair, almost albino white in complexion weaves irregularly through his locks shining with a bright glint in the sun across the edge of his trademark hat. When under his zanpaktou's influence, appearance and abilities is that of his younger self with devastating consequences.
    Personality: Lazy, amused. Veiled in all his actions, but incredibly swift to keen judgment and action when the lives of others are at stake. An almost sensei like aura excludes any betrayal from reaching him, and sometimes even will impart something of use to others when necessary.


    Your Legacy:

    Character Story: Omitted.
    RP Sample:"Drown, Hime." his words came out harshly, soon flowing with turbulent thoughts in rapid succession. The crying tears faded into permanent blue lines down the user's eyes, blessed relief from humanity that they so despised to be merged within him. All feeling gone, he tilts his head lightly as the host of the cybernetic core of his estate, staring at the music box as the wires and machinery geared and turned with his slightest motion. Turning the wheel on the music box as the gates of the 12th shut closed in all save the 11th's office as the one who stuck up for the clockwork doll, Rioshi grasped the small dream sphyre and sang into it as the entire Seireitei shuddered at the vibrations echoing throughout the entire estate. Abruptly it stopped, as the dying young scientist fell limply to his knees, supported by his zanai before the nanobots could scour the blood from his throat. His smile was soft, yet sad as the Gatekeeper rushed in and settled the now locked doors of the Machina Domain.

    "I will tell you little girl, what you would have said to Leam that hour." the scientist said as he was lifted to his cane once more, knowing full well that as shinigami, their lives were now at the call of a music box for their betrayal. "If death is a stepping stone, betrayal is knowing you still live."

    Your Zanpakuto:
    "Aotsuki. Aotsuki. Come out, come out. The wind is howling, and the tide is out."

    "My Hime, My Hime. Taste it, Taste it. The blood is burning, and the flesh is your route."

    Zanpakuto Name: Aotsuki-Hime, the Serpent Queen, Princess of the Still Waters.
    Sealed Appearance: Think a female Poseidon, a goddess of the sea with the blackest scales of a sea serpent for a tail. With an almost irresistible body from the waist up, she is colossal in size and enjoys playing god with her hosts- seeing each shinigami as merely a temporary shell to devour of energy and move on. Raven locks floating silently around her in a whirlpool of killing intent... If you get close enough to feed, prepare to be marked worthy of her interest and transformation- for better or worse. None have yet to earn her favor and every recorded user of this zanpaktou is listed as having died within a decade at most.
    Zanpakuto Spirit Description: She is a force of nature- her very presence in Rioshi's mental state drowning his inner world in a sea as deep as it is filled with her horrors. She doesn't choose someone because she wants to help them. Oh no. She is Grimm Fairy Tales dark mermaid- swimming up to sailors, smelling the fear off their sweat, and drowning the most scared down into the lightless depths where she would eat them piece by piece... After all, who better than a machine empathist to enjoy tormenting for eternity with visions of rust? Just be careful; she loves manifesting herself in the seireitei to taste the fear and emotions off nearby passerby.

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    Shikai
    Shikai Release Phrase: "Breathe. Until you Drown. Aotsuki-hime.*"
    Released Appearance: There is little difference in a host during this zanpaktou's shikai except for a declared bargain of sorts with Aotsuki. She is patient with her hosts, but loves speeding up the entropy her manifestation causes by offering power. Should the host accept, she will physically devour the offending part of the body and replace it with a tremendously corrupting limb or body part that seeks to corrupt whatever it touches or is immersed in. Sadly, she controls this and uses it to corrupt the host as well. The first thing Rioshi did when he arrived in the current... land was to make a pact with her in return for her eating his Heart. He has regretted it ever since, and it has strained his sanity to breaking.
    Other Changes: The taint of Integrated Conciousness begins within the host. Effectively they can interface with machina on a full mental and physical level, but in return lose all emotional capability. The machine aspect itself is only due to Rioshi's own personal convictions.

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    Bankai
    Release Phrase: Drown Me Forever, Aotsuki. I ask a boon of the Serpent Queen."
    Released Appearance: This is the only time Aotsuki will manifest completely within the living world. In one fell swoop the Serpent Queen of the Depths will drown the area in reiatsu emulating constantly moving waves, glowing ominously in the darkness. She will ask the price only once, and when it has been freely given according to the bargain, she will sink her claws into your chest and in one slow grasp she will crush the heart afforded in the original contractor's agreement and possess the body. In return, she will manifest completely and seek to fulfill their last wish before killing everyone they knew and loved in retaliation. Take care since the soul itself is no longer there, so there will be nothing barring her to a human form any longer.
    Other Changes: The host forfeits their soul, and is trapped in eternity as their shell is possessed by Aotsuki. Ends only with their vessel's death, but is again a bargain; sacrificing the user's entire existence for the full power of the spirit and the host's reiatsu to be bent towards one task.

    Abilities
    Name: Tears of Rust
    State: Shikai through Bankai progression
    Terms of Usage: The heavier it is depended on, the more Hime's corruption spreads. Along with the contract requirement of her devouring your heart, it also causes memory loss on a damaged scale and eventually ends with death.
    Description: Water and technology bends at the host's collective whims, but in reality is powered by Aotsuki herself to greedily absorb the user's tormented psyche when they attempt to remain sane after. It also has a corrupting effect on any nearby abilities, feeding on it like a parasite at the cost of the user's lifespan. The corruption itself fades after battle since its a sustained ability only by his own strength of will, but Aotuki's foothold mentally and physically over the host will not fade until the host perishes. Temporary strength when needed, but long term suffering in return. Any offending limbs will never be able to perform kido again as they are mentally on a different wavelength from the rest of the body and cannot be used without Aotsuki's permission.



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    Post by Rioshi Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:38 pm

    Long story short, was also asked to write out a bit more on my zanpaktou, so figured this was an excellent opportunity. Also linked to it in my signature for easy of access. Approval, changes, and *constructive* criticism appreciated. No flames since I had to do this all over again by hand while moving lmao.

    -Rio
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    Post by Loli Gaga Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:35 pm

    1/2 approved

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    Post by Rioshi Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:48 am

    Aotsuki Pictures added by request.
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Mon Jun 11, 2012 3:42 am

    So he doesn't actually HAVE a weapon?
    Also, not truly sure about the bankai. I mean, I know that its downside is extreme but even then, the move itself seems FAR to overpowered in and out of itself. At least how it is worded
    killing everyone they knew and loved in retaliation
    Not sure as to what it means and I could be completely wrong.
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    Post by Rioshi Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:34 am

    Correct. Rioshi is part machine, meaning he integrates her consciousness into his circuits. There is no actual *weapon*, besides what he forms out of a blade that- simply put- is just made out of nanomachines. It is incredibly easy to destroy as a result, since he has yet (obviously) to perform the bankai or manifest Aotsuki willingly.

    Rio cheated. Aotsuki won't let him actually summon her corporal form because she detests his very existence. To clarify, she sees people as loathesome creatures only worth the amount of energy she can devour from us as hosts. Thus the only way to summon her for now would be to sacrifice something worth her giving a taint of her power.

    Likewise, Bankai is effectively a suicide pact with some unfortunate consequences. I die so I can have a better shot at killing you so to speak. Except the cost of course is to watch her get back at you by possessing your body and doing whatever unnatural horrors she desires.

    Though who said it was the *enemy's* loved ones she kills? Again, she loathes her host. She could care less about whatever her former user was fighting aside from the bargain.

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