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    [Short Story] The Lotto Winner

    Kambly
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    Post by Kambly Wed Dec 03, 2008 11:22 am

    I wrote this last year, so of course it isn't as good as my latest.



    He used to be homeless. He used to have an old rusty beard. He used to sit beside a dumpster. But now he doesn’t. He won the lottery and now he doesn’t have a beard, just cuts from trying to shave his beard. You can see him now, wearing his expensive suit, gold tie and unstained, blue shirt sitting in his giant mansion.

    He has baggy eyes because ever since he won the lottery he was forced into press conferences. He still looks tidy with his polished, tied-up shoes and cuffed sleeves. He’s sitting in his enormous mansion watching the fireplace, away from the cold. He looks sad and lonely, separated from the outside.

    He falls asleep with his feet resting on the couch. He looks disturbed and terrified. You can see his mouth trembling and his baggy eyes shut tight with his new glasses on top of his head, a book resting on his lap and a wine glass beside him. The orange coloured fire lit the room and his frightened face, which had tears running down it. He knocked over the wine as if he was in agony. Who knows what’s going on in his dreams? Only he knows…

    Suddenly his hazel eyes lit up. His eyes watched the room. His pale skinned hand shivered when he saw the red wine on the white carpet.




    Very short story. Hope you enjoyed it! ^_^
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    Post by Loli Gaga Wed Dec 03, 2008 7:25 pm

    WOW. thats super descriptive..

    ^^

    but its too short and it seemed incomplete. good job non the less amy. ^^
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    Post by Kambly Wed Dec 03, 2008 7:36 pm

    Lol, well, you see, it was homework. XD

    And I got a 9/10 for it, by a teacher who I kinda bad-mouthed about.

    So I'm proud. :P
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    Post by Loli Gaga Thu Dec 04, 2008 5:37 pm

    HAHAHA, good to hear you are. ^^ Bwahahaha!


    stick it to the MAN!

    the man?

    YES, the MAN!!!
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    Post by Kambly Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:02 pm

    Well...the teacher heard me bad-mouthing him. XD

    I said, "I wish he would just die".

    He was right behind me. XD Stupid english teacher.

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