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    [Short Story] Flying.

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    Post by Kambly Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:42 pm

    This was written during a class. Improved on at home. :P

    Enjoy.

    Spoiler:

    Edit: I submitted it on deviantArt. Leave a comment there if you have an account. Link.
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    Post by Kambly Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:13 pm

    Gah, I hate double posting but...

    [Short Story] Flying. BellyBump

    I need some crit. Come on. =.=
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    Post by Loli Gaga Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:26 pm

    ZOMG, disgusting bump.

    LOL, Any way, i like it, easy to read, nothing wrong with it at all. (had no idea you wrote)

    Reminds me of air gear cry out loud i just watched it yesterday, sadly it ended.

    its the flying thing that's common about it.

    loved it

    good job ^^
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    Post by Kambly Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:28 pm

    Haha, thanks Ruru. :P

    Are you sure there's nothing wrong with it? XD
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    Post by Loli Gaga Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:39 pm

    yeah, nothings wrong with it.

    just... i dunno, kinda like air gear, they leave you clueless in the end.

    haha

    love it
    *grieves air gear*

    faved it on DA too.
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    Post by Kambly Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:45 pm

    Okay, I seriously need to read Air Gear. You make it sound so cool.

    Thanks again, Ruru! :P
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    Post by Loli Gaga Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:48 pm

    haha, yeah, i get addicted to things easily, and air gear is one of them atm.
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    Post by Kambly Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:17 pm

    Hmm, I might post another short story soon.

    Maybe you'll get addicted to it? ;)

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