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    meaningless poetry (watch me blab i'm a poet, woot!)

    Loli Gaga
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    Post by Loli Gaga Wed Oct 22, 2008 5:09 pm

    Kinda poetic but yeah, some rhymed.


    Nothing
    how many tears do you have to cry
    until you reach the moment you die
    all for that dream to reach the sky
    you decided to commit suicide

    a slit on the wrist,
    from a tie you now choke
    on the coffin you lie awake
    with all the emptiness you evoked

    now were all empty with nothing to prove
    for God was our jury, our witness and our hope

    i walk into the bright white light
    where a never ending journey begins to uphold

    as i pass by, white turns to grey, grey to dark
    nothing was at it seemed or so i thought, was this my dream?

    was i wrong or was i right?
    did i have a choice, for what i liked?

    is life that real? or is it the dream?
    for where in we need to die
    just to know that were real?

    is this heaven or my oblivion?
    my sin or my righteousness?

    What do we really know?

    For all i know is that there is only one true thing in this world.

    and that is... non.
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    meaningless poetry (watch me blab i'm a poet, woot!) Empty Re: meaningless poetry (watch me blab i'm a poet, woot!)

    Post by Emma-Hell Girl Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:57 pm

    Ruru! Is this your first poem? If yes, then this is really good. The begining sounds great. I like the begining a lot.

    how many tears do you have to cry
    until you reach the moment you die
    all for that dream to reach the sky
    you decided to commit suicide

    Things started to get loose after this.
    Loli Gaga
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    meaningless poetry (watch me blab i'm a poet, woot!) Empty Re: meaningless poetry (watch me blab i'm a poet, woot!)

    Post by Loli Gaga Tue Oct 28, 2008 7:50 am

    haha. yeah, i know.

    those were the only lines i truely meant i guess..

    and nope, i dont think this is the first peom i made.

    hmm.. i dont make poems much, just songs.

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