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    Nelliel sketch part II

    Loli Gaga
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    Post by Loli Gaga Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:13 am

    my first one was an epic phail, this one too XD

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    comments are appreciated.

    do remember i'm my biggest critique XD
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    Post by Nance Thu Jan 29, 2009 5:01 pm

    I must say, you have a unique style of drawing. Ruru-style. good job

    It looks great except the neck. It's kinda long. XD
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    Post by Hazou Sun Feb 08, 2009 11:32 pm

    The neck is to long and the eyes are weird.
    Have you looked in the mirror, it might help with human facial proportions.
    To study the human face and everything might help you a bit.
    It's a good sketch though, don't get me wrong...it just needs some editing.

    The reason I'm being a bit nicer since it's a drawing, I can't draw I just know what looks right.
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    Post by JennyReika Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:43 am

    Its not bad at all...

    Although, the face is a bit too elongated, especially for anime... its giving you a drawn out nose, and lips are always hard, I've had problems with them.

    What I would say is to actually draw some Manga characters... like look directly at the picture, and draw the lines as you see them.

    When I was young, the way I learned to draw was actually by tracing. Tracing was the easiest way for me to understand the body.

    After awhile, I could draw a silhouette like it was nobody's business. I learned a lot, and since then, I have been drawing like a maniac.

    My pictures arent perfect, but I am not a bad artist. I think that ppl put too much pressure on ppl who trace, really, its the best way to learn... I was 5 years old and tracing, and by 7 I was drawing ppl better than most kids in college for art.

    Its all about remembering lines, knowing muscles and the curve of them... and remembering the basic anatomy and proportions.

    Once you have those, youre set.
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    Post by Panda-chan Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:42 am

    Wauu Interestiiing i like picturees whic was drawed whit penciil :)

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