New Manga On the Works (sort of new)

Well I've been working on this last month or so, not entirely happy with the art yet, but I wanted to share it, so I will.

First seven pages of the one-shot (supposedly a one-shot, but i kinda lost track along the way, so im not sure anymore.)


As for what this is, it's a re-make of a re-make which could be found here.

http://www.bleachdynasty.com/t3695-messiah-prophecies-ruru-original-manga-re-make


SO yeah. Anyway here goes.

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Wow, Loli! I like it!
The story is very good and I can sort of feel what is going to happen next, especially with the bonus images^^

One of the things I liked about it is that the story sort of flows and right from the jump you know what the story is about! Even though I'm an animation student myself (done some storyboarding here and there) I'm actually having trouble coming up with a strong beginning ;_;

Any pointers would be helpful -.- :)