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    Shulo Jet

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    How did I do for my first time making a character?

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    Post by 3ternal Sun Jul 01, 2012 6:22 pm

    I AM Shinigami not anymore

    Basic Information:

    Human Name: Shulo Maku
    Shinigami Name:
    Shulo Jet
    Gender:MaleAge: 20
    Division:
    1
    Rank:
    Lieutenant
    Residence:
    UnknownAppearance:sort of averaged size in size,Long white hair wears army vest with a black combat boots and combat jeans black in color

    Personality:He is very flexible in his thinking and very intelligent also thinks 2 moves ahead.

    Your Legacy:Character Story: Shulo was born in a wealthy estate his parents were rich he had a good life for 3 years of his child hood,When he turned 9 he soon after was weirdly able to see spirits later on he told dad and his mom what happened as he didnt know what they were but his mother and father were retired substitue soul reapers they told him they had me and Had to settle down. Soon after Shulo started seeing scary creatures called hollows,3 days after the siting his parents were dead and left for the spirit realm, 4 yeahs later I developed shinigama like power and a horde of hollow appear one day I had to fight them off shinigama from the SS showed up to help me and aftewards they took me to the SS and I became a luitenant of squad 1.After learning my zanpuktou's name.One day I was fighting a arrancar I had no idea what he was but I knew he some type of hollow he possessed me making me a vizard for a week I fought him off while in care of the soul society,I won claiming my powers as a Vizard, when I became a vizard i didnt know was I soul reaper or hollow
    It puzzled me for the rest of the day as of that day i began bankai training.The training was relentless after 5.5 years training I learned how to use my bankai but hadnt mastered
    it yet at this time I begun to learn the technique one particular technique I learned where my opponent is near and a current forms around my body combined with ym reiatsu sends an opponent or a hollow or attack flying back if it was used on a person there body would receive severe burns and explode
    the explosion doesnt hurt me because outside of the current is affected,I performed this when my mentor used an attack then speeded towards me and pretty much like bounced back towards him,I was surprised by his reaction to it he had told me we're making progress i was excited to learned I am slowly mastering it I began to quickly figure out ways to use my powers to my advantage,my zanpuktou controls air so I figured
    that in an open space i have the higher advantage,so after a whle I began to quickly master my bankai in under 10 years.

    RP Sample:
    *As the wind blast comes towards me,My shadow forms around dragging me under into my shadow realm,letting me escape the dome of fire into the hole of darkness created in the ground by my release.*
    You think that was enough to kill? *I fly out of the hole to my realm of Darkness I focus my reitsia and black dark mist forms around in the air mixing with clouds and completely blocking the sun and the sky for 8km away from the center a Giant dark wall of darkness forms in circle around the plane blocking all view into the plane.*Subete ōu kage!!!(All-Covering-Shadows).

    We are now in my realm of darkness the plane in which I was born in loneliness in which you will now Die!!!!

    *The Golem are almost done regenerating .*
    *A Large Giant Shadow Forms under Joon Engulfing and suffocating the air out of the space around him attempting to suck him into the shadow inside the shadow is a vaccum much like space no fire can be made inside there no oxygen no life only death.*

    Muhahahah
    *I take my zanpuktou and sonido into the air.
    Cero Secciones!!!! *The Cero forms and shadows get swallowed into the cero increasing its Volume and Velocity.*
    The Cero fly towards the engulfing shadow of Darkness that is trying to engulf joon.
    Divides into 8 smallers Cero coming from 8 different direction into the around the shadow, if dodged will cause a explosion as big as 1km creating smoke clouds.*


    Vizard Information: (Before being able to produce mask and use vizard abilities, proper training must be done despite membership date within group. The more training you do, the better your control is. Mask Duration will be added when Vizard is ready for RP.}

    Vizard Mask: Shulo Jet Images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQSPLDnBpz27MxdklU9EMkop1k5iiUC7skEzQq8QweI6-CYLpUrpQ_14tB_fQ
    Hollowfication:
    I win in the hollowfication.

    Hollow Manifestation:

    Your Zanpakuto:

    Zanpakuto Name:
    Jettobaningu Sealed Appearance:a normal looking sword long word longer then my body.
    Zanpakuto Spirit Description: A Large Humanlike Bird,his wings are quite large and his appearance is slim and speedy looking

    Shikai

    Shikai Release Phrase:Blow up,JettobaninguReleased Appearance:A large cleaver type sword lighter then usual.
    Other Changes:

    Bankai

    Release Phrase:Explode,Oshitsubusu JettobāninguReleased Appearance:Metal armor forms around me with Large Jet Thrusters sticking out my back,Wind rushes around me rapidly
    Other Changes:My zanpuktou looks like to Knuckle buster type of weapons



    Abilities (Max 16 you can add/unlock as you progress in-game)

    Name:Bakuhatsu-tekina toreiru
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:Normal usuage
    Descrption:while I am sliding across the ground able to make explosions from my boosters.


    Name:Jettosuraidingu
    State:Bankai
    usuage:Normal usuage
    description:My Jet booster turn on and I am able to slide across the ground like its ice



    Name:Jettobūsuto
    State:Bankai
    usuage: Normal usuage
    description:The jets on the users back Turn on and I am able to fly around.

    Name:Doheki
    State:all
    Usuage normal usuage
    Description: a giant wall comes forth from the ground blocking attacks.

    Name:Super Cero
    State:Vizard
    Usuage:Only when my vizard mask is on.
    Description:a large cero moderate in size.

    Name:Takai eā-atsu
    State:All
    Usuage: Normal usuage
    Description:Makes it easier for fires and explosions to happen boost my explosion power


    Name:Burēdojetto
    State:Shikai
    Usuage: Normal usuage
    Description:A Obstruction forms on the users blade that look much like a small jet and the jet shoots out a flame that instantly turns into a explosion.

    Name: Chikyū torenchitorappu
    State:Bankai
    Terms of Usage:Normal usuage
    Description:User pounds their Fist into the ground and I Two Giant Trench walls form around the opponent trapping for a few seconds.

    Name: Rokettosumasshu
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:Normal usuage
    Decription:user performs a punching motion and a invisible wave goes toward the opponent and explode causing a large explosion that can cause heavy damage to ground creating a 1
    Km crater.

    Name:Kaze ga gyaku denryū
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:Only when the opponent is attacking its a counter move.
    Description:The opoonent attack user can make a current and force the opponent in when they sre close the wind current ignites into a lethal explosion the explosion doesnt hurt the user.

    Name:Kūki kurōn
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:at will
    decription: air forms around the user dividing into clones, the clones look exactly like the user.

    Name:Tetsu no hako
    state: bankai,vizard
    Usuage:at will
    decription:User does make s an a box of air form around anything box feel like iron and has a tangible look.

    Name:Air screech
    state:Vizard
    Usuage: only when Vizard mask is on
    decription:air vibrates around an object can be used to stop incoming objects,shatter ice or glass, disapate gases.

    Name:Saidai basutā
    state:Bankai
    usuage:at will
    decription:User snaps their finger a ball of fire appears and begins to get larger and larger approaching th enemy, creating a giant explosion on contact.


    Last edited by 3ternal on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:52 am; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixing)
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    Shulo Jet Empty Re: Shulo Jet

    Post by Loli Gaga Sun Jul 01, 2012 6:29 pm

    Although you copied the template, it's not in the proper format.

    Can you edit this with the proper one?
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    Post by 3ternal Mon Jul 02, 2012 4:16 am

    [i]whats the proper one?
    Can you help me out?


    Last edited by 3ternal on Mon Jul 02, 2012 4:41 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : adding to my question)
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    Post by Loli Gaga Mon Jul 02, 2012 9:03 am

    Copy this code below


    Code:
    [font=Trebuchet MS][color=cyan][size=24][b]I AM Shinigami[/b][/color] [/size][size=18][color=white]not anymore[/color][/size]
    [size=18][color=red][b]Basic Information:[/b][/color][/size]
    [b]
    Human Name:[/b] {Name when you were alive}
    [b]Shinigami Name:[/b] {Name after death}
    [b]Gender:[/b] (Sexual Preference)
    [b]Age:[/b] {How old is your character)
    [b]Division:[/b] {Your Desired Division}
    [b]Rank:[/b] {Your Desired Rank}
    [b]Residence: [/b]{Where does your character currently reside?}
    [b]Appearance:[/b] {A detailed explanation or a picture}
    [b]Personality:[/b] {How does your character think?}


    [size=18][color=red][b]Your Legacy:[/b][/color][/size]

    [b]Character Story:[/b] [i]{What's the story behind who you are, it doesn't have to be long, but don't make it too short either. We embrace creativity, and love a mystery. Though we would like to see your full vizard history on how you conceived your mask and all, we would much rather see it in the process of RP-ing here. So like shinigami, you will be a rogue after approval, free to join any organizations/clans that may tickle your interest.}
    [b]RP Sample:[/b](We prefer quality over quantity.)[/i]


    [size=18][color=red][b]Vizard Information:[/b][/color][/size] [i](Before being able to produce mask and use vizard abilities, proper training must be done despite membership date within group. The more training you do, the better your control is. Mask Duration will be added when Vizard is ready for RP.}[/i]

    [b]Vizard Mask:[/b] (Detailed explanation or a picture)
    [b]Hollowfication:[/b] (Your control over your hollowfication, which side wins over which?)
    [b]Hollow Manifestation:[/b] (What you look like if you're hollow takes over - optional)

    [size=16][color=red][b]Your Zanpakuto:[/b][/color][/size]

    [b]Zanpakuto Name:[/b] (Name of your Zanpakuto}
    [b]Sealed Appearance:[/b] {Your Zanpakutos regular state}
    [b]Zanpakuto Spirit Description:[/b] {Describe your Zanpakuto Spirit}

    [size=14][b][u]Shikai[/u][/b][/size]
    [b]Shikai Release Phrase:[/b]
    [b]Released Appearance:[/b]
    [b]Other Changes:[/b]

    [size=14][b][u]Bankai[/u][/b][/size]
    [b]Release Phrase:[/b]
    [b]Released Appearance:[/b]
    [b]Other Changes:[/b]

    [size=14][b][u]Abilities[/u][/b][/size] (Max 16 you can add/unlock as you progress in-game)
    [b]Name:[/b] (Name of the ability)
    [b]State:[/b] (Shikai, Bankai, Vizard, Regular Or All)
    [b]Terms of Usage:[/b](Is the technique activated, or can you do it without any special terms or conditions)
    [b]Description:[/b] (Describe what your technique can and cant do)

    [/font]
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    Shulo Jet Empty Re: Shulo Jet

    Post by 3ternal Mon Jul 02, 2012 2:42 pm

    Still wrong?


    Last edited by 3ternal on Mon Jul 02, 2012 2:44 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : correcting mistake)
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    Post by Loli Gaga Thu Jul 05, 2012 12:40 pm

    If you want to be a Vice Captain level character your character history needs to be more detailed as with other aspects like the personality and some of the techniques.
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    Post by 3ternal Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:55 am

    Does this look good? T.T
    If there's anymore I need to add ill be sure to add it.

    I'm also sry that I am taking a long time to finish this.
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    Post by Loli Gaga Thu Jul 19, 2012 11:02 am

    Name:Bakuhatsu-tekina toreiru
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:Normal usuage
    Descrption:while I am sliding across the ground able to make explosions from my boosters.

    Can you define this explosions more? Like how or when they explode.



    Name:Doheki
    State:all
    Usuage normal usuage
    Description: a giant wall comes forth from the ground blocking attacks.
    How large is this wall? How strong is it, What is it made of?



    Name:Super Cero
    State:Vizard
    Usuage:Only when my vizard mask is on.
    Description:a large cero moderate in size.

    How is this cero different from normal cero?

    Name:Takai eā-atsu
    State:All
    Usuage: Normal usuage
    Description:Makes it easier for fires and explosions to happen boost my explosion power

    How exactly are the flames and explosions made easier? Do you release more steam, or whatever it is, is there an element added etcetc.

    Name:Burēdojetto
    State:Shikai
    Usuage: Normal usuage
    Description:A Obstruction forms on the users blade that look much like a small jet and the jet shoots out a flame that instantly turns into a explosion.


    What is this techniques range? Or How far does it reach in meter radius?

    Name: Chikyū torenchitorappu
    State:Bankai
    Terms of Usage:Normal usuage
    Description:User pounds their Fist into the ground and I Two Giant Trench walls form around the opponent trapping for a few seconds.

    How long in posts can these walls trap the enemy (depending on there ranks of course) . And how strong is this wall? Can they break it with bankai strong? or a low level shikai?

    Name: Rokettosumasshu
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:Normal usuage
    Decription:user performs a punching motion and a invisible wave goes toward the opponent and explode causing a large explosion that can cause heavy damage to ground creating a 1 Km crater.

    How many times can you use this in a fight? Please add a charge and cool down for this.


    Name:Kaze ga gyaku denryū
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:Only when the opponent is attacking its a counter move.
    Description:The opoonent attack user can make a current and force the opponent in when they sre close the wind current ignites into a lethal explosion the explosion doesnt hurt the user.

    This needs a clearer explanation and a downside.

    Name:Kūki kurōn
    State:Bankai
    Usuage:at will
    decription: air forms around the user dividing into clones, the clones look exactly like the user.

    What do the clones do? Do they attack, or are they just mirror images? How many clones exactly?

    Name:Tetsu no hako
    state: bankai,vizard
    Usuage:at will
    decription:User does make s an a box of air form around anything box feel like iron and has a tangible look.
    Sorry, but can you explain this more, So this box forms around 'anything', i supposed that anything is the oponent, and it would trap the opponent?

    If so for how long can an opponent be trapped (Depending on rank)? Can they break out from this? Does it do anything else aside from trapping them?


    Name:Air screech
    state:Vizard
    Usuage: only when Vizard mask is on
    decription:air vibrates around an object can be used to stop incoming objects,shatter ice or glass, disapate gases.

    This needs a range and a downside.

    Name:Saidai basutā
    state:Bankai
    usuage:at will
    decription: User snaps their finger a ball of fire appears and begins to get larger and larger approaching the enemy, creating a giant explosion on contact.

    How large can this ball get? Is there a way to avoid/stop it?
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    Post by 3ternal Fri Jul 20, 2012 6:18 am

    I give up on this character the whole idea on him sounds stupid to me now,also would I be allowed to make
    another character?
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    Post by Loli Gaga Fri Jul 20, 2012 8:34 am

    Yes, ofcourse. But are you sure?
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    Post by 3ternal Sun Jul 22, 2012 5:29 pm

    Yes very much so.

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