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    Post by Siddhartha Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:29 pm

    I AM Godking ruler of the empty

    Basic Information:

    Character Name: Siddhartha
    Gender: Male
    Age: 1997, Appears 23
    Appearance: Siddhartha is 7'6 feet tall He's body is felled with tattoos see pic of other info
    Spoiler:
    His hole is just below his neck. His mask remains is a crown just above his forehead.
    Personality: Siddhartha is calm and collected under the most dire of circumstances. However, his stoic demeanor can irritate others since he responds to their thoughts with sighs or grunts. By his own admission, Siddhartha has spent most of his time focusing on improving his skills and almost no time at all on cultivating friends aside from the animalistic hollows in his kingdom.

    He also seems annoyed by those who use their skills to oppress hollows, especially those who proclaim that they are doing it for the sake of their job or superiors. He will often remark that there is no honor in serving a cruel tyrant or not having a just reason.


    Your Legacy:
    Your Story:

    • I was once part of the living... He was an orphan, as soon as he was born, his parents abandoned him in a back alley. If it wasn't for his cries, a monk never would have stumbled across him. After that the monk took him in and raised him so growing up he was trained to be a monk. On his twenty-first birthday, they sent him out to collect offerings in the city. He bumped into a beautiful young woman and it was basically love at first sight. It was the same for her as well. Over the next couple years, they found themselves to be soul-mates, every chance he got the chance, he would rush off to the park, restaurants, or movies to meet with her.
    • and then, i died... During the day before his twenty-third birthday, they sent him out late that night and he stayed out late collecting offerings. He was outside of a restaurant, when a robber approached him and asked for all his money that he had collected. Refusing the man, the robber shot him on the spot and took the money. Not caring for the money, the only thing on his mind was his lover. Making his way a half-mile away as he knew his end was near, he reached her door and knocked. His last words were as she opened the door and they were "I love you." Being a monk, one would think he would be ready for death but he felt remorse and despair. Knowing that he was going to run away the following night with her.
    • I became less and less human, i became, empty His chain bonded with her, he never left her and was stuck in the human world. He followed her where ever she went in attempts to protect and guide her. But within that year, it basically brought him guilt knowing that she was suffering without him. As she became weaker and weaker dew to her lose, he became more and more enraged. After months go by, she had lost her job and given up her will to live. He was watching her over her bed, filled with so much anger, his chain ate its last link and his transformation was quick as he turned into a full hollow. His first victim was her.
    • I became the ruler of this world, I am became... a God-King. After he killed her, he realized just what he had done. He knew what he had done, it was like he was asleep and finally awoken by a constant ringing in his head. As all his memories flashed back into his mind. He slowly took both his hands up to his face, filled with so much rage against himself, he forcefully tried to rip his mask from his face, hating himself for the monster he had become. After year's later of he became and Arrancar and made it is Mission to find He's love. The Kingdom he made was make to make up of all he's sin's Just becuase he was a monster did not mean he had to live like one. the only thing he need to make is Eden Hole is Her.


    RP Sample: As Siddhartha sits there on the rooftop, Staring at the star's Wishing he could take it back all of it. He's Life... Just to be with her And he sit there this Rage build up as he's left hand slowly climes up hes right arm. He start Pulling at is Tough Skin leaving deep womb and gases. " I Really hate you..." As he started talking to him self with this taste of Disgust in he's moth and mind. The sun slowly start to rise, He know it was time to move on as, he's left hand let go and the wounds started to heal quickly." I really hope i find you.. to be free from my endless hell. Deep within the hell of my heart I can't go back
    A self-tortured loser, not being able to see tomorrow
    Suicide is the proof of life. Until I'm able to be with you my love.Let's blood flowers of attempted suicide..." he opens he's Garganta to return to he's kingdom.



    Release Information: (This is for future reference, you must acquire this techniques in-game, same with the process of Espada evolution)
    Basic information:

    Zanpakuto Name: Behemoth
    Weapon of Choice: Brass Knuckles
    Appearance:
    Element: Light
    Spiritual Pressure Color: White with golden streams
    Other Information: This weapon can not hurt people with good heart. When around someone with evil or bad intentions the Knuckles will spark with lighting.

    Resurrección: (please re-use this form if you have more than one resurrection)
    Resurrección Name: Behemoth
    Descriptions: {Resurrection description/information}
    Release Command: "Behold! In plaited mail, Behemoth rears his head!"
    Released Appearance:
    Other Changes: Behemoth is a giant. A human is the size of a balled fist to him in his resurrection.

    Techniques: (maximum techniques 12, re-use the form provided please)

    Name: Snap
    State: Regular
    Terms of usage: N/A
    Description: Directly teleport to any chosen location within a half a mile;
    Downside: Can't use any skills in the same post as Snap.


    Name: Zen
    State: Both
    Terms of usage: Has to have the element within range.
    Description: Summons Spheres of ground, wind, flames, water and neutral element(light and darkness).
    Ground: Increases the users Defensive power, enables them to take more strikes from physical objects.
    Wind: Increases the users Agility, enables them to travel faster than the user is normally able.
    Flame: Increases the users Offensive power, enables them to deal greater damage than they would otherwise be able too.
    Water: Increases the users Spiritual power, enables them to deal greater spiritual damage with kido or spells
    Neutral: Increases the users Spiritual defense, enables them to take more strikes from kido or spiritually powered attacks.
    Downside: Spell CAN be interrupted


    Name: Fury
    State: Both
    Terms of usage: Zen must be activated beforehand.
    Description: Each sphere shatters and the remains sink into the skin of the user. The Reiatsu during this time is halted and used to increase the overall output of the skills
    Downside: Last for 10 posts; after the skill ends, the user is dazed, confused, and immobilized for a short period of time


    Name: Asura Strike
    State: Regular
    Terms of usage: Usable only when Fury is active.
    Description: Uses a high majority of the users spiritual power to do massive damage to the target.
    Downside: Regeneration is not possible naturally for 5 days after Asura Strike is used; Cancels Fury after use and requires all five Zen Spheres; Can't activate any other skill during that battle.


    Name: Raging Palm Strike
    State: Regular
    Terms of usage: Must have Zen active
    Description: Attack an enemy with your palm. The target will receive nasty damage, and will be pushed 3 yards in the direction of the strike.
    Downside: Can't be used in rapid secession; if not in Fury, it consumes one Sphere


    Name: Blade Stop
    State: Regular
    Terms of usage: Must have Zen Active.
    Description: This skill operates using the Hierro of the arrancar to fortify the users hands, this allows the user to "catch" an attacker's strike, freezing both the user and target for a few moments.
    Downside: Both are immobilized from the technique; if not in Fury, it consumes two Spheres; Last for two posts


    Name: Throw Spirit Sphere
    State: Both
    Terms of usage: Must have Zen active
    Description: Throws Spirit Spheres at enemy, damage is of the type of sphere thrown and how long it has been summoned around the user; The longer the sphere has been active, the larger the destructive power.
    Downside: Can only go in a straight line forward; The sphere is only as strong as it has been active.


    Name: Spiritual Endowment
    State: Both
    Terms of usage: Must have Zen active; Must have someone to use on.
    Description: Transfer one of the users Spirit Spheres to another individual. Uses up 1 Spirit Sphere each time it is used.
    Downside: Uses 1 Spirit Sphere to give one Spirit Sphere; Last for 4 posts;


    Name: Sky Blow
    State: Both
    Terms of usage: Must have Zen Sphere active
    Description: A spinning blow that kicks up a small tornado-like wind around the user, dealing damage to all targets in an area and throwing them back. When using the skill, it consumes 1 spirit sphere.
    Downside: Has to be on solid ground; Cant be used in succession


    Name: Fallen Empire
    State: Regular
    Terms of usage: Must have Zen Sphere active; Must be in Fury
    Description: Use your shoulders and fists to do an upwards blow to deal large damage to a single enemy. The enemy takes additional damage if the target is heavier. After receiving damage the target is unable to move for a short period of time from the shock.
    Downside: Can't activate Asura Strike in the same battle; Speed is decreased a short period of time after usage;


    Name: Rising Dragon
    State: Both
    Terms of usage: Must have five Zen Sphere's; Must be in Fury
    Description: Temporarily releases the users mind and spirit, allowing them to gather more Spirit Spheres, improves their attack speed. During the duration of this skill they remain in Fury. If the users health gets too low, the skill effect will cancel.
    Downside: When using the skill, it will slowly drain the users health by the moment


    Name: Gates
    State: Both
    Terms of usage: (Is the technique activated, or can you do it without any special terms or conditions)
    Description:
    Downside:
    1. One no longer thinks of the damage done to the body so deadly strikes are not distinguished between normal ones but the effects are as they are intended to be.
    2. Heals the body but only the wounds created at the time of activating the gate.
    3. N/A
    4. May cause muscle tissue to tear on use.
    5. May cause increased muscle tissue to tear on use.
    6. Increases the overall body heat of the user and damages those around him which also burns the users own skin.
    7. The side effects of opening the gate are that the user's muscle fibers are ripped to shreds, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches him.
    8. Opening this gate assures the user's death shortly after.


    Name: Gate of Hell; Rakshasa Phoenix Destruction Fist
    State: Regular
    Terms of usage: Can only be used while in Fury state;
    Description: Strikes a target with countless blows within moments of one another. The more spirit spheres the user has, and the lower the users health, the more damage it does. The skill consumes a great deal of spirit energy and all of the users Spirit Spheres. Can be used after Fallen Empire, and when used this way, the spiritual power consumption is reduced greatly and the damage slightly increased.
    Downside: After used, the user is defenseless for a post; If used by itself, it takes away 1/4 of the users spiritual pressure and it can not be regained till fully rested



    Kingdom information: (Every God-king gets a kingdom)

    Kingdom Name: Garden of Eden
    Size: Large
    Climate: 70-75 degrees
    Geography: Look at the picture below
    Limnology: There is a single large mass of water that is a small lake that is fed water from a not to far off waterfall that never seems to diminish
    Vegetation: Luscious green grass', plentiful in terms of fruit and vegetables, Many different types of trees and bush.
    Population: 31,000: This ranges from hollows the size of a beetle to an elephant.
    Description:
    The sky itself is duel covered, somewhere in the middle, the line between night and day is blurred as one crosses into the other. All hollows and beings within the kingdom find themselves at peace as violence is forbidden within. They feed off of the fruit and vegetation of the land that is plentiful with spirit energy.


    Last edited by Siddhartha on Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:09 am; edited 5 times in total
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    Post by Loli Gaga Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:44 pm

    is this done?
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    Post by Siddhartha Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:38 am

    I add more stuff that was missing. It should be done now. I had Lee help me with this.
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    Post by Rioshi Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:50 am

    Thought I saw a touch of Lee. Plus he's overzealous with red usually; a good tip off. the only problem I see is that this does have a touch of god moding in it and that's really hesitating me from approving this. Instantaneous teleportation at will, countless blows that are magnified impossibly by health gauge after being combo broken by an attack that forces the opponent in unbreakable paralysis... Added with the Gates that essentially are a mix of buddhist calm mind and Gai's unsealing measures that culminate with his death;

    He's effectively an untiring tank that *cannot* be defeated in straight combat, except by those of good heart or intentions which his sword will refuse to fight.

    All in return for only one turn lost and spirit sphere usage? Which can simply be for naught if he decides he is about to die and just snaps away?

    That's really pushing the envelope, man. No emotional trauma, no character depth tied to his attacks when they're effectively *killing* him...Have to hold off on an approval till this has been fleshed out a bit.

    Gah.
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:07 am

    .........overzealous with red? What does that mean?
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    Post by Rioshi Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:24 am

    I love how you ignored my entire post to focus on the color notation xD Simply put, you favor red any time you work with any color based moderation as I've read your threads.

    EDIT: Well, to be fair gold as well as your regular font. Plus the red joke in chat made me feel a touch of amusement.
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:31 am

    I only use red in the chatbox when I'm there.
    Like you said, gold is my color and as for my other characters, they speak in dark blue, purple, and orange.
    Red really doesn't point toward me.
    Added to that, I agreed with your comments so why would I need to add more?
    And lastly, that is all u_u
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    Post by Rioshi Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:35 am

    ....


    MRGLESTMPTR HAGGELFRAGGEL RESIST URGE TO CHOKE TIN MAN! xD You only replied to deny my color us....oh forget it. x.x
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    Post by Siddhartha Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:02 am

    I fixed it up..
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    Post by Rioshi Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:23 am

    Much better. Just make sure there is some sort of training roleplay every so often- this level of martial and mental discipline usually requires strict training to keep it in shape. Otherwise...

    Congratulations. APPROVED.


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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:40 am

    Looked over everything and again, just watch the number of times you use some of the moves and remember the downsides. Aside from that, everything seems honky dory.
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