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    Post by Minato Souji Sun May 22, 2011 7:05 am

    I AM Shinigami warrior of god

    Basic Information:

    Human Name:
    Minato Arisato
    Shinigami Name: Minato Souji
    Gender: Male
    Age: 342
    Division: 8th Division
    Rank: Recruit
    Residence: 8th Division Barrack
    Appearance: Souji,Minato 75395
    Personality: Quiet, reserved, and generally goes with the flow. Minato's a pretty chill guy and quite easy to get along with, once you look past the whole 'man of a few words' thing. He reaches out to others and gains their trust. He forms bonds with others and helps them out, pretty much only when he's asked to, sometimes even at the cost of himself. Minato is all right with the fact he's either used as an emotional crutch or even a sacrifice. He knows when to give people space when confronted with their own problems.
    Through all the different kinds of people he meets and interacts with, Minato adopts the role of the best friend, son, rival, team member, and so on - but when it comes down to it, he's not any of those. Like his power, Minato is everything and nothing at the same time.

    However, despite all the bonds and close friendships he's made,Minato is still a loner. He's content on leading his missions in life alone and seems to be fine with this. Any burden, problem, or internal conflict he's got, Minato bears silently. He opens himself in order to let others approach, but he never really lets anyone in. Even in the end, only a very small handful of people somewhat understand him


    Your Legacy:

    Character Story:

    ~Human and Death Arc~

    Minato was born in a normal family in a normal place. He was a clever and popular boy in school. Many people were jealous of him. He was a the best student in the Kendo Club and He lived a normal life until his parents died. His parents died in an accident so Minato was adopted by a kind person. They get along with each other and Minato resume his life like normal. After a few years , Minato was in high school. He was walking to his house. He saw some small children playing beside the road so Minato decided to watch them play.Suddenly , Minato saw a big hollow in the middle of the road. The ball that the kids were playing went to the hollow. The kids were going to get the ball until Minato came. Minato pushed the kids aside and without noticing , the hollow killed Minato. The hollow was later killed by a Shinigami. Minato's body was buried and suddenly , something happened. His soul was just wondering around and he wants to find a way to go to heaven.

    ~Soul Arc , Soul Society and Division Arc~

    Then , he saw a big hollow , trying to eat him. Minato ran quickly . Suddenly , he trip and fell. A person in a black kimono like clothes appear in front of his eyes. That person introduce himself to Minato. It turns out that he was a Shinigami. The Shinigami killed the hollow and brought Minato to the Spirit world.He was in the place where souls go. He decided to live there for the time being. One day , he went to a shop and found another shinigami. Minato was out to buy some things. That shinigami felt an intense presence from Minato.She told Minato that Minato had a large amount of spiritual power. She asked Minato to go to the Academy . He went to the Academy and graduated at a short time. He is able to master his Zanpaktou and later placed into the 8th Division.He can't wait to be trained.



    RP Sample:(From a Naruto Site I RPed on)
    A few days later , Minato went to a Ramen Shop. "Welcome!! What do you want to order for today? It's been a long time since I met you. How are you?" said the shopkeeper. "Hei! It has been a long time.. I would like the special please" said Minato . while smiling. After a while someone came into the shop. "Welcome!! What do you want to order for today?" said the shopkeeper. "The special , please." said the man. Minato was shocked. " It must be the man who I met with the cat the other day." he thought. When he turn back , it was the man he met with the cat. "Oh , hi Minato . Told you we will meet again." said the man. "Well , yea I guess." said Minato. "Want some more? It's my treat for found my cat." said the man. " Thanks." saild Minato while smiling.

    Your Zanpakuto: {To be able to use technique, Shikai and Bankai, knowledge and know how must be acquired in-game)

    Zanpakuto Name: Sunlight
    Sealed Appearance:
    Spoiler:
    Zanpakuto Spirit Description:
    Spoiler:

    Shikai
    Shikai Release Phrase:Pierce through , Sunlight Heart
    Released Appearance:
    Spoiler:
    Other Changes:N/A

    Bankai
    Release Phrase:Charge and Pierce , Jousting Sunlight Heart
    Released Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    Other Changes:

    Abilities Max 12

    Name: Sunlight Crasher
    State: All
    Terms of Usage:N/A
    Description: An attack which wraps the cloth around the lance to increase the overall speed and destructive force of the charge. Minato's most powerful attack. Faster than usual charges, but not as fast as "Slasher".It takes up a lot of spiritual energy to use this.
    Drawbacks: Fatigue very easily.
    Limited range.(13m maximum)

    Name: Sunlight Slasher
    State: All
    Terms of Usage:N/A
    Description: A charge attack propelled by the cloth's energy. Minato's fastest attack.It takes a lot of spiritual energy to use this.
    Drawbacks: Fatigue very easily.
    Limited range.(9m maximum)

    Name: Sunlight Flasher
    State: All
    Terms of Usage:N/A
    Description: A flash of light from the cloth to blind enemies. Doesn't seem to have any direct offensive use, other than as a distraction.
    Drawbacks: Can only use for a limited time.(2 posts)

    Name: Sunlight Piercer
    State: All
    Terms of Usage:N/A
    Description: A charge attack propelled by the cloth's energy. It will pierce through any kind of defense .It make the user tired very easily after using this.
    Drawbacks: Fatigue very easily.
    Can pierce at 7meter range.

    Name: Sunlight Piercer +
    State: All
    Terms of Usage:N/A
    Description: A charge attack propelled by the cloth's energy. It will pierce through any kind of defense. The is the stronger version and it take more spiritual energy than Sunlight Piercer.
    Drawbacks: Fatigue very easily.
    Can pierce at 10meter range.



    Last edited by Minato Souji on Sun May 22, 2011 12:21 pm; edited 4 times in total
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Sun May 22, 2011 9:23 am

    All of your skills have to have more defined downsides. What you are giving doesn't really have a set drawback.

    And have you talked with the 8th squad captain?
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    Post by Minato Souji Sun May 22, 2011 9:31 am

    Edited.
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Sun May 22, 2011 9:37 am

    Sunlight Crasher and Slasher, What is the range? Feet? Yards?

    Sunlight Flasher, how many posts will it last?

    Sunlight Piercer and Sunlight Piercer +, Can you be more descriptive on the drawbacks, since bankai is different for every person, it is not a accurate downside.
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    Post by Minato Souji Sun May 22, 2011 9:45 am

    edited
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Sun May 22, 2011 10:14 am

    The distances between your skills need to differ more. Having a skill that is stronger than the other but have the same distance doesn't make to much sense.
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    Post by Minato Souji Sun May 22, 2011 10:24 am

    Edited
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Sun May 22, 2011 10:47 am

    It would be best to remove the 'anything/anyone' in the last two skills and replace it with something less godlike. That makes things seem to godly.
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    Post by Minato Souji Sun May 22, 2011 12:21 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Lee_Takamoto Sun May 22, 2011 12:26 pm

    Well, that is all I saw that could be changed so you have my approval.
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    Post by Kyouga Mon May 23, 2011 12:45 am

    2/2 APPROVED

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