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    Post by Damdradon Sat Apr 16, 2011 8:53 am

    A Creature of Heaven Manifest, am I Of Heavenly Realms, residing.
    Basic Information:

    Angelic Name: Ab Incunabulis
    Name: Incun (Pronounce In~Sun)
    Gender: Male (No romantic interests)
    Residence: Never remains in one place for long, traveling almost constantly.
    Angelic Appearance:
    Angel Form:
    Human Appearance:
    Human Form:
    Personality: Incun is a peculiar personality.A creature bestowed of great powers, he is perfectly content with his lot. He seems to have no ambition, in all his ages of being, he has never wanted. He has never strived for more power. He has been likened to an actor more than anything else. He always plays his part, and plays it well. He may seems like the friendly, generous hero who saved the village, but really his soul isn't in it.

    Otherwise, Incun's personality depends on the role he is playing at a given time. He is naturally curious, his only consistant trait, as it helps allevitate the stress of countless centuries of living has on his mind. He's partial to his small hobbies, namely tea, and board games. He generally makes small talk during situations, as nothing of such urgency, that you cannot hold a conversation. As such, he's not the first choice in an emergency situation in soul society. Though was set into action, his influence is immense.

    Incun generally refers to others with familiar terms, and prefers when others do the same


    Your Legacy:

    Character Story: Ab Incunabulis (Incun for short) is incredibly old. He cannot remember the all details of his early life, he has lived so long. Incun manifested in the Heavenly Realm during the reign of the first Spirit King, with powers much the same as the ones he possesses this day. With his power and abilities he survived the early struggles of the new Spirit Kings, a loyal servant to Heaven always.

    A being older than Hell, Incun has watched over the planes of existance for almost as long as they have been there, tasked as one of the earliest scouts in the then imminent war with Hell. Since then, Incun still continues his patrols through the planes. Incun has clashed with the forces of Hell innumerable times, since time immeasurable, and as such is quite an expertise in the art of combat, and though not an aggressive character, his ire is a terror to shake the souls of the denizens of Hell.

    Incun's knowledge is vast, but unfortunately time has a habit of locking it away in the depths of his memory. As a result the knowledge of the finer details of events unfolded millennia ago is rather hazy, the bigger facts still remain. An example would be when Incun was asked about the First Spirit King, Incun could not remember what he looked like, but could describe the sensation of being in his presence. Careful meditation or a particular occurance may trigger memories, but these instances are quite rare.

    Incun has been patrolling the planes for a long time, and these years takes his time doing so. His personality means he hasn't changed much from when he first came into being. He travels under the guise of a young man intent on seeing the world, though Incun has been everywhere, more than once. He enjoys good tea, and is usually hard-pressed to refuse some. He talks with people often, his age and wisdom sometimes leaking through his act as a young man. These are the small things that Incun does to keep him immortality from slowly sending him insane. "You learn something new everyday" it is said, and Incun has learned many things.

    RP Sample: The light mist pattered down on blue-grey evening, a light fog had descended some hours ago, and everything was glistening in the little slivers of sunlight that managed to pierce though the cloud. The tap of his boots was quickly muffled by the wet air as the man casually strolled through the woods, the creatures of the woods quiet, in the lazy, wet warmth of the evening. As he approached a small house near the path, the front door opened, and soft yellow lamp light spilled onto the path, as if blocking the way. A wizened, little lady tottered out and began to shake the dust off a rug. The man continued walking, casually watching from under his dark travelling, hooded cloak. As he got closer, the soft tap of his footfalls reached the old ladies's ear and she glanced down the path, just as the man was passing the house. "Oh, dearie, why don't you come in out this miserable weather and rest up?" the little old lady chimed at the man. The man shook his head and continued his casual pace. "Oh now, none of that, come in for a hot cup of tea!" she piped at him. At that the man stopped dead, a slight crunch of loose stones as he turned to face the woman. Taking back his hood to reveal a young looking slender face, he smiled at the lady, "Ok miss, that, I cannot refuse."


    Angel Information:
    Angel's are divine beings but they have to embody there powers into the form of a single weapon to show their might
    Arme Divine:
    Arme Divine:

    Your Forme d'ange:

    Forme d'ange Name: Vultus Ut Terminis
    Forme d'ange Appearance:
    Forme DAnge:


    Abilities:



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    Post by Damdradon Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:18 am

    Ok, I think that's everything.
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    Post by Kyouga Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:27 am

    You need to have some downsides for your abilities.
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    Post by Nerovampyro Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:52 am

    1/2 approved

    just watch out about the last ability..
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    Post by Funnyguy339 Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:13 am

    Ah... they have a point, there needs to be downsides added. Please add them before I can properly approve them
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    Post by Muerte Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:24 am

    Since my post was deleted...

    It can't be approved till the downsides are added.
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    Post by Damdradon Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:27 am

    Awesome, thanks.

    I'd like some help with the downsides to abilities. I'm haveing a hard time thinking of them as most of the powers are essentially focused points of one ability, air pressure control.

    So, suggestions would be welcomed an appreciated

    EDIT: Some Downsides added, can you guys check 'em out/
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    Post by Kyouga Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:41 am

    Could this air pressure control also affect you like a double-edged sword? (It has a negative effect on your body?)
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    Post by Damdradon Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:50 am

    Yes, but Tractus ut Spiritus keeps most of it at bay. Incun's moves are essential a combo set, the major downside of which, though i didn't spell it out it that to use them together, (which is how he does it) requires a lot of focus. Tractus being the key ability. The aura will set to a 75 meter radius
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    Post by Loli Gaga Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:04 am

    You want help, i'll help, here are questions that can help you.


    Name: Tractus of Spiritus
    State: All
    Terms of Usage:Tractus of Spirtus is constantly active anywhere it's effect is possible.
    Description: Tractus of Spiritus is a movement technique than involves changing the pressure and flow of the air around Incun's body and augmenting his speed and strength immensely. This technique is often used in conjuction with other movement techniques like "Flash Step" to make Incun one of the fastest beings.

    Possible downsides. Defense down, for speed, you give up a part of your defense, is that fair?


    Name: Aura of Infirmitas
    State: Human*, Angel*, Forme D'Ange
    Terms of Usage: Constantly Active in Forme D'Ange. Requires activation in Human and Angel Forms. Reachs a radius of 75 meters and the effect is uniform within the area affected.
    Description: Aura of Infirmitas is a more powerful version of Tractus of Spiritus, that affects a wide area centred on Incun. In this area, the air(or suitable medium) is thinned considerably, causing any beings in the area of effect to become deprived of air. Holding breath is not a viable counter to this effect as the decrease pressure would cause the air in the lungs to rupture them. This technique also affects Incun, but he has trained to fight in the lower air environment. An additional effect of this technique it the speed boost granted to all in its area of effect due to lower air resistance.



    A charge and cool duration would be nice. How many posts can you use this attack for, and i think a 75m redius is to wide a scope.

    Name: Pugnus Ventus
    State: All
    Terms of Usage:Activated on use. Short range area of effect (Standard Move)
    Description:Pugnus Ventus is a close combat move that involves compressing the air in front of Incun's fist and releasing the pressure upon impact, releasing a powerful directional shockwave. The impact is often enough to send most beings hurtling in the direction of the punch. Though generally used with his fists, the technique is not limited to them, as it can be used with the feet, elbows, etc.

    How many attacks does this last for before a cool down?

    Name: Obex Ventus
    State: All Forms / Forme D'Ange
    Terms of Usage: Requires being able to react. / Requires concentration. Barrier size is small. Blunt weapons are not stopped well.
    Description: By focusing Tractus of Spiritus, and/or Aura of Infirmitas into a small area, Incun creates a small barrier of liquid air to stop and deflect incoming attacks. This technique is particularly effective against physical attacks, as is can rebound projectiles and snap blades. In Forme D'Ange, by concentrating more Incun can form a larger barrier of dense air to block or deflect larger attacks

    Possible downside is speed down, or better yet, not being able to move at all. If not one of those, maybe you cant do any attacks while using this technique. Just suggestions.

    Name: Deus Pugnus
    State: Forme D'Ange
    Terms of Usage:Slight charge up needed. Activated on use. Uses a lot of energy. Long cooldown time before next use.
    Description: An immensely strong large cyclone of air is blasted from Incun's fist, anything caught in the cyclone is reduced to dust, as the high speed, sharpened air shreds everything in it's path. The blast is very controlled and something beside the cyclone, but not in it wouldn't even feel a breeze from it.

    How long is the long cool down, how many posts do you need to have before being able to activate it.

    And, how many of this cyclones can you make? can you make 2 in one go, or are there other requirements for for something like that to happen. (say a situational basis or so)

    Name: Contricio queror ut ex fletus Deus (~Crushing Lament of a Crying God~)
    State: Forme D'Ange
    Terms of Usage:Requires sustained contact with target for a few moments. Use of this Technique ends is Forme D'Ange, and he can't re-enter the form for a length of time.
    Description:Incun's most powerful technique, and one he tends to refrain from using. While touching the target Incun highly compresses all the gas in the victim's body, like the lungs and blood vessels, and the air around the victim. If the victim survives the compression, Incun releases all the pressure at once, and the gases decompress violently, shredding the victims body from the inside. This technique is normally lethal, and Incun tends to try avoid resorting to it.

    So this is much like planting an unnoticed bomb inside an enemies body? How can the enemies avoid this without dodging or evading or so. IMO there should be a downside where it is timed and within a certain radius area only, that way you can control it, and when they go too far away, the activation halts.
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    Post by Loli Gaga Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:53 am

    Okay, since i see changes made and it appears that you agree with the downsides i suggested, i give the other half of approval.

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    Post by Damdradon Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:59 am

    Thank you very much
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    Post by Muerte Mon Apr 18, 2011 9:21 am

    Since this player is approved, congrats btw, i'll be moving it to the approved section :)
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    Post by Funnyguy339 Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:22 pm

    Lol welcome to heaven aswell xD

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