Zakiri

Shinigami Template

Basic Information:

Human Name: James
Shinigami Name: Zakiri
Gender: Male
Age: 800

Division: 11th
Rank : 4th Seat

Residence: The Seireitei. Closer to 11th company's base though.
Appearance: (Replace the outfit with the outfit Shinigami wear. I can't remember what its called.)

Personality: He's not very talkative. He cares more about his mission then anyone else. He will slaughter those who get in his way.

Story: James was a plain human being who had nothing better to do in his spare time then listen to music and wear black. He lived in America so he knew nothing of the soul society until he died from an accident involving him and his own father. He was sent there while his father just barely escaped death.

When he got to the soul society he was given the new name of Zakiri and the reason for that was not given to him. So he began to live in Rokangai (Please forgive me if its spelled wrong) alone with no one else around him. Until he found out that he had Spiritual pressure or Reishi. When he found this out he was taken to the Seireitei where he took his entrance exams and he got in to the school for Shinigami.

He was brought into the advanced class and not only that, but he was the top of his class too. He pretty soon went into the Gotei 13 and he was taken into the 11th company. He began to train and fight there and pretty soon he was taken up to his current rank. He now fights for them and cares about nothing else but the mission he has been given.


RP Sample: Zakiri was sitting in his room just waiting for a call to come in for him to take care of. He sat there for a little while until he received a mission. He got up and he put on his outfit and headed out the door in the direction of the Senkaimon where he would be taken to the world of the living. Apparently there was a large hollow attacking some place called Karakura. He himself had never heard of the place, but a mission was a mission.

He got to the Senkaimon with his Zanpaku-tô attached to his belt. He went through it with his hell butterfly and when he was there he looked down. "Hmmf that thing'll be sorry that it got me as its opponent." Zakiri said as he jumped down and he withdrew his blade. He slashed down at the beasts head, but it blocked with its hand.

"Oh I see you've got some skill." He said as he ran at the thing and he slashed upward. He had caught the things chest, but he hadn't cut the things mask just yet. "Errggh. Die already. Feast Za Airon Tsuwamono!" He shouted as his Zanpaku-tô began to change its form from one blade into two with scythe like ends on them and connected in the middle with a chain. He then slashed at the beast and this time he decapitated it. "Thats what you get for infuriating me." He said as the blade transformed back to normal and he stepped back to the Senkaimon and he left.

Zanpakuto Information:

Zanpakuto Name: Za Airon Tsuwamono (The iron warrior)
Sealed Appearance: It looks like a normal zanpaku-tô, but the hilt has two three leafed clovers on them.
Zanpakuto Spirit Description: His Zanpaku-tô is a large man in Iron armor. Almost like a medieval knight, but his sword is specialty made as a scythe sword.
Release Phrase: Feast Za Airon Tsuwamono.

Shikai
Released Appearance: It extends slightly, and it gains two scythe like ends. The blades are hooked together with chains that can extend if they need too.
Other Changes: N/A

Passive abilities

Name: Power increase
Description: Raises power slightly.
Downside: Lowers speed slightly

Name: Health Vampirism
Description: With every successive blow. Zakiri gains more health
Downside: Damage is lowered

Name: Thick armor
Description: Gain more defense against oncoming attacks
Downside: Power is lost


Active abilities

Name: Chains of Fate
Description: Chains come from the Zanpaku-tô and wrap around the victim and hold them there. It can also wrap around the other Zanpaku-tô and make it immobile. It shoots out very quickly.
Downside: They can be broken easily. They drain Zakiri's health. It can be dodged by someone who is quick enough. (Health drain effects still apply even if its dodged.)

Name: Reap
Description: Zanpaku-to float by the will of the owner, and attack the opponent
Downside: Zanpaku-to can not go longer then 50 feet away from him

Bankai
Release Phrase: Destroy them Za Airon Tsuwamono
Released Appearance: Zakiri obtains armor that goes around his body, and his blades' edges become serrated.
Other Changes: N/A

Passive abilities

Name: Health Vampirism
Description: Gain health equal to the amount of damage done to the opponent
Downside: Attack lowered

Name: Iron Unbreakable Armor
Description: The armor formed around him is almost unbreakable
Downside: It lowers speed

Active abilities

Name: Gerasion
Description: Large flames shoot from the blade (Like Getsuga Tensho) In an arc.
Downside: The flames do not last, but the do burn. (In other words once the flames hit you they vanish)

Name: Reishi Cannon
Description: A large blast of Reishi comes at the opponent. It looks light blue and is very strong. A normal Zanpaku-tô can not block. Only one in Shikai or higher.
Downside: It takes some time to charge (1 post.). He is vulnerable while it charges.

I am Captain of the 11th divison. All other spots are open

Put vice-captain so others who apply for the division don't get confused.

Your welcome

Okay, my turn.

Name: Chains of Fate
Description: Chains wrap around the victim and hold them there
Downside: It drains health and it can't be used longer then 7 seconds

Does this chain come from somewhere or do they just materialize out of no where?
Charge duration? Cool Down?

Name: Reap
Description: Swords float on their own and attack the opponent
Downside: Swords can not go longer then 50 feet away from him

By swords, you mean your zanpakuto? So this means when you use this attack, you dont have you throw your zanpakuto or something?

Or do you make swords appear out of thin air? (like byakuya or something)

If so how many swords are there? And by moving on there own, do you mean autopilot, or controled, in which way, if its auto pilot, it can even hit you.

Name: Gerasion
Description: Large flames come from the blade and engulf the opponent
Downside: The flames do not last, but the do burn. (In other words once the flames hit you they vanish)

So this means you have to hit the opponent or does the blade produce a wave of flames engulfing the opponent?

Name: Reishi Cannon
Description: A large blast of Reishi comes at the opponent.
Downside: It takes some time to charge.

This Reishi cannon, where does it come from? Is it a separate tool, or does your zanpakuto take form of it or what?
How fast is this blast?
and how long in posts does it take to charge?

there are no real charge durations and cooldowns here, thats what she means, otehr that that, i see a mighty amount of things that could use some editing, ill list them soon give me some time however.

Name: Chains of Fate
Description: Chains wrap around the victim and hold them there
Downside: It drains health and it can't be used longer then 7 seconds

rephrase the description 'chains from the zanpakuto shoot in the direction of the enemy at great speed, in attempt to bind their movement'. the way you put it makes it sound like an Auto-hit, thats not a good method to making a tech.

Name: Gerasion
Description: Large flames come from the blade and engulf the opponent
Downside: The flames do not last, but the do burn. (In other words once the flames hit you they vanish)

explain the mothod of the attack. like getsuga tensho, will the blade shoot out an arc of fire towards the enemy? you make it seem like the opponent just 'spontaniously' lights on fire. again, sounding a little too auto hit for my liking.

Name: Reishi Cannon
Description: A large blast of Reishi comes at the opponent.
Downside: It takes some time to charge.

ummm, so when you charge are you completely volnerable? also, if you want, you could add more detail maybe, like looks, how strong it is, what it can or can't be blocked with, etc.

for your own safety, make your charging for your last tech like 1 post. for the reason that if you just sit their for 3-4 posts, your pretty much dead. so you can decrease it with my permission. other than that i think its good.

Well I think everything I need to mention has been pointed out, so I'll only add this:

If you aren't applying for a captains exam as well, then you are only applying for a division,not VC.

VC's are selected by captain of the 11th Division, and until we have one, we only have 11th Recruits.

You mean 3rd seat ^_^

If everything else is to Musha taichou's liking then this app is as good as approved.

I'm glad you were approved, I just wanted to clearup what i said, when I said that VC's are picked by captains. I wasn't saying that you couldn't be one, by all means if you are picked I'm in favor of it, what I meant is right now there isn't an 11th captain, as the current candidate is still in exams and has to comepletely pass to be selected to the post.

Sorry bout that; sometimes I have so much to do I don't speak as clear as I should. either way i like that appand good luck! jump into the rp whenever you like!

Haji