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    Post by Hazou Thu Nov 25, 2010 6:33 am

    Human Name: Hajime Saito a.k.a Hazou

    Shinigami Name: Hazou [hah-zoo]

    Gender: Male

    Age: 680 [appears 22]

    Division: 13

    Rank : Captain

    Residence: Soul Society

    Appearance: As you walk through the estate of soul society, you see a young man staring at the trees. You stare at his back, wondering what he is looking at. What it is he is thinking about. His black kimono makes him look like he's going to a funeral, but you're surprised y the white scarf across his neck. His long deep blackish purple hair gleaming in the sun. He turns around as if he noticed your gaze and you're startled by his rather handsome appearance. His eyes are a piercing blue color, that look fierce and yet at the same time somewhat gentle. Two swords stand by his side and you bow yourself out as you feel you have made him feel uncomfortable.
    Exactly like picture, this costume is considered his lounge wear. What he wears when he isn't running around fighting.

    Lounge Costume Be Careful Images are Kind of Large

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    Costume 2

    At the battle lines, as everyone prepares for an attack you see a wave of purple hair you recognize. You see the handsome young man has let his purple hair down from its ponytail, waving in a long main. He's wearing a traditional black hakama, but appears to not have the scar. A tight leather jacket sewn together with a cloth tailcoat and wrapped around his forehead is a long headband. At his side, tied in his white sash is his two swords.
    Exactly like image, even the appearance because its the same character as above

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    Personality: He appears rather like a loner, he doesn't talk much and seems a bit distance to people. But he's rather actually just shy. He doesn't know how to enter conversations and doesn't know how to be the kind of person everyone likes. He's a strong leader, holding unto very high values of justice and morality. He cares deeply about people and is very kind and very gentle. When in battle he's fierce and loyal and if he has to will protect those who follow him. He's a strong leader, but also a loyal and strong friend. He likes cats and respects those who are honest and kind. He dislikes dogs and disrespects liars and cheats. Sometimes he can be hard to take due to his strong personal views. He's headstrong and stubborn, but not to stubborn where he won't listen.

    Story:

    People always say they died young. That it came out of nowhere, that they didn't know why they died. Truth is I probably don't know why I died. I remember growing up in Tokyo. Kind of a buzz of life. With giant stores, a lot of people, a lot of cars, and a lot of buses. My family and I never really got along. Dad and I always fought. Mom was never around, she really took the pioneering woman stuff to far.
    I guess sometimes I hated my life. I hated it because no matter how I tried, no matter how much I tried I couldn't find that I could change. I tried being the person people wanted me to be, but that got me nowhere. Instead it left me feeling lonely, it left me feeling as if I was lying to myself. I began to even resent even myself. How could this be possible? How could I begin to even hate myself?

    When it was time to get into Uni, I took my father's route. All our fighting had to do the fact that he wanted me to run a business. I wanted none of that. Funny thing is I seemed like such a serious guy. The kind of guy who got picked on, but was still strong. But I remember nights after being picked on and then being yelled by my father, crying in my room. I always wanted to write manga or comics. I guess I loved to draw and design. It was fun and creative and it gave me the escape I always wanted. Uni, I felt free even though I was taking courses I never really liked. But at least it meant I could live on my own and it meant I was free from all the high school and other childhood bullying I had to suffer from.

    I admit I was a bit of nerd back then, even now. Most people still think I'm a little weird. But that doesn't bother me. I made it here, to this place called Soul Society. I don't look at my past with any regret. Rather its what allowed me to be strong here. It allowed me to take the position I'm in now. Rather then dwelling on the past. Rather then crying over it, I decided it would make me better.

    I want to be the kind of person who is there for people. Instead of leaving them alone, instead of letting them run into the circle that is their life. Even now I seem like a weird person, but its my job. Its my job to do what I can.


    Zanpakuto Information:

    Zanpakuto Name: Shiki

    Sealed Appearance: Regular Katana

    Zanpakuto Spirit Description: Quezacotl [Feathered Snake]

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    Release Phrase: English "Shiki Release" in Japanese "Shiki rirīsu"

    Shikai

    Released Appearance: Katana, as in his pictures

    Other Changes: The sword now shines with majestic light of justice. The light sorta bounces of the blade, makes the blade shinier looking, but sparkles more with the light.

    Passive abilities (passive abilities are abilities that need no activation. maximum of 3)


    Name: Water Resistance

    Description: Water is under the jurisdiction of the moon. Therefore the blade is resistance to most water attacks. This also has a semi gravity effect on any water abilities. Creating a kind of control the moon would have over tides.

    Downside: Electricity

    Name: Lightwave

    Description: The sword gleams with a kind of light that represents a semi heatwave. The sword makes it hard to focus and can create small scale illusions the way a heatwave may.

    Downside: Someone could easily close their eyes, or not focus on the blade. They could rely on other senses.


    Active abilities (Active abilities are abilities that needs activation. maximum of 3)

    Name: Kōha [Light wave]

    Description: Like waves of water, a wave of light is released from the blade. Blinding the enemies for brief second. Used in close range.

    Downside: It can be dodged, if he's charging in anyone can stop his charge


    Name: Hikari no hana [Flowers of Light]

    Description: Rocket size meteorites made of light rain down and explode, blasting enemies back and doing shrapnel damage. Long range attack, works in a small radius. If they were standing a few feet from each other. Do a circle around them and that's how big. I'll get a pick up.

    Downside: Hard to control and summon, recovery time. They are large size meteorites. Its like a person who has the ability to pick objects. Sure they can pick up that car with their minds, but its hard, its heavy and takes up a lot of mental strength. These things are huge, heavy, and probably leave you a tired afterwards. You'll most likely have to recover.

    Name: U~ōtāfurasshu [Water Flash]

    Description: A glimmer of light and water come down in a sweeping motion. Used as a sweeping attack to sweep enemies off their feet. A low attack. Its not a close range attack, but not long range. Its more like a medium range as the enemy is charging in.

    Downside: Any expert fighter could easily dodge this attack. Especially if their doing an above attack, like jumping up or soaring.

    Bankai

    Release Phrase: Full Moon [Mangetsu]

    Released Appearance: His second blade and his normal blade combine. Shiki is now in its original form. Shiki's New Form

    Other Changes: Still sparkles with majestic light

    Passive abilities (passive abilities are abilities that need no activation. maximum of 3)

    Name: Water Resistance

    Description: Description: Water is under the jurisdiction of the moon. Therefore the blade is resistance to most water attacks. This also has a semi gravity effect on any water abilities. Creating a kind of control the moon would have over tides.

    Downside: Electricity

    Name: Benevolence

    Description:The sword releases benevolent energy and repels the spiritual pressure of dark enemies.

    Downside: No offensive abilities, its merely defensive

    Name: Lightwave

    Description: The sword gleams with a kind of light that represents a semi heatwave. The sword makes it hard to focus and can create small scale illusions the way a heatwave may.

    Downside: Someone could easily close their eyes, or not focus on the blade. They could rely on other senses.

    Active abilities (Active abilities are abilities that needs activation. maximum of 3)

    Name: U~ōtāsutōmu [Water Storm]

    Description: Large size twisters are summoned and the twisters through large round circular balls of light that explode.

    Downside: Attack can be doged, but for how long. Attack takes a lot of energy to summon.

    Name: Raitokattā

    Description: If any of you have seen Inuyasha, think Kazenokuha. This wave of blade cutting light appears from the sword and rushes towards the enemy. A large scale whirlwind of light that extends from the blade.

    Downside: Enemies powerful attack similar in style could disrupt it, can be dodged


    Name: Yunibāsu“Quake” [Universe Quake]

    Description: The large form Hikari no hana. A large meteorite covered in light comes crashing down, creating a giant crater and is used more for shrapnel damage. As it impacts the ground the meteorite explodes into pieces, and creates a quake as it hits the ground.

    Downside: Slow recovery, this is probably considered his ultimate attack. And leaves him drained.


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    Post by Muerte Thu Nov 25, 2010 6:35 am

    I don't see any problem with this. I approve of it.
    Just let Seraphim or Mushasune take a look and if any of them approve, it's fine.
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    Post by Hazou Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:44 am

    I just began to add the sword information. I'll finish this later.
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    Post by Muerte Thu Nov 25, 2010 9:04 am

    The character is what's approved lol, sorry, should have worded it differently
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    Post by Haji Yukimura Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:59 am

    I approve of your character, however I am a little reluctant to have another Hajime on the forum. I do encourage you to go with another forename.

    I will say yes, but you will also need either ruru, sanba or beans to agree with me also, as you will need at least 2 admins.

    However, in order to become captain you will have to pass the exam which we are working on now.
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    Post by Hazou Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:24 am

    He usually just goes by Hazou.
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    Post by Haji Yukimura Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:34 am

    it's fine. It's not like there aren't other Hajime.

    I approved on the character though, it's only the captain part I can't sign off on.
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    Post by Hazou Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:17 pm

    I understand Haji. And I know that...just crossing my fingers is all.
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    Post by Mushasune Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:26 am

    ite, lets looks at this stuff here first

    Passive abilities (passive abilities are abilities that need no activation. maximum of 3)

    Name: Water Resistance

    Description: Water is under the jurisdiction of the moon. Therefore the blade is resistance to most water attacks.

    Downside: Electricity

    im here to make sure you get all you can out of your zanpakuto, and this here is a very limited passive ability. you say the BLADE is resistant, but what about the character? and not only that but it seems your only passive ability is used for is against water users, which is slightly difficult to work with, from your standpoint. BYakuya's passive was manipulating the motion of the blade like petals, he could use that passive ability without his techs to win a battle. Kumomura could manipulate the movements of his giant passively and i dont even think he had techs. So i would suggest you create a more detailed and more defensive/offensive passive ability to help you out.
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    Post by Hazou Fri Nov 26, 2010 3:10 am

    Mushasune wrote:ite, lets looks at this stuff here first

    Passive abilities (passive abilities are abilities that need no activation. maximum of 3)

    Name: Water Resistance

    Description: Water is under the jurisdiction of the moon. Therefore the blade is resistance to most water attacks.

    Downside: Electricity

    im here to make sure you get all you can out of your zanpakuto, and this here is a very limited passive ability. you say the BLADE is resistant, but what about the character? and not only that but it seems your only passive ability is used for is against water users, which is slightly difficult to work with, from your standpoint. BYakuya's passive was manipulating the motion of the blade like petals, he could use that passive ability without his techs to win a battle. Kumomura could manipulate the movements of his giant passively and i dont even think he had techs. So i would suggest you create a more detailed and more defensive/offensive passive ability to help you out.

    My sword is still under work. I have to sorta work out the kinks. It will take me a moment, but I'm getting the basics down is all. Then I'll add more details. I'm putting down the things I know I want, then working through them and talking.
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    Post by Mushasune Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:43 am

    the attack that you say is from inuyasha, describe it more. i myself have not seen the series, so i have no idea what you mean. add more detail to it and ill approve.
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    Post by Mushasune Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:50 am

    Approved
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    Post by Haji Yukimura Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:40 am

    ~ Moving to approved characters ~
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    Post by Loli Gaga Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:00 pm

    Re-approved for reset

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