Orcus WIP

Name: Orcus

Sex: Male

Species: unknown believed to be one aziens creations not proved

Styles: Kendo, kidou, hand to hand (specialised in)

Description: his 6'4 and weights 300lbs. his hair is down his lower back it colour is black. His well built and toned, he has running down his forearm with blue eyes.

His hollow hole is located on his chest just over his heart. When his uses reiastu it’s colored a silver center and the outer rim dark red.

In the soul society he wears the shimigami uniform as normal but is strictly forbidden to expose his hollow hole as only tenth seeds or higher know of what i could potentially be.

in human world or any other he doesn’t wear his uniform of the shimigami, he wears black jeans and a trench coat as far his ankles with chest part upon exposing the hole, he wears black heavy boots as it stops half way up his shin. Wear black figureless leather gloves and usually has sun glasses on.

Back story: at young age of 8 he appeared in the far east side of the soul society as his reiastu was spiralling out control as he was effecting most of the soul in that district. The captain Unohana Retsu was first to get to him as she realised this wasn’t a hollow but not a shimigami either. He lead a very quiet kept away from other shimigamis for most his young life where Captain Kurotshuchi Majuri would try and figure out what he is. His was order not to kill or cripple him. This made him very un-happy not the ideal working conditions to his proffered methods.

While growing up his was being trained by captain Komamura Sajin and was made to train with Soi Fong for him solo missions where the ideal missions seen by head captain Yamamoto Genryuusai. He was never put into a squad more a ghost of the society doing ugly jobs by himself. Only time he teamed up with other shimigami is with vice captains and Ikkaku.

i liked the idea to this character ^^

There's a lot of errors in formation of the sentences which is whats confusing me. Well, maybe not a lot but you know...

please dont post here unless the WIP is gone

if you'd like i can re write it?

I dont mind, but the template you used, i noticed its not one of ours, are you trying to create something else?

no copy paste i trial running it on xat. should i change it?

Well, it would be nice if you picked something from BD, but im okay with it just so long as it has all the details we need.

so will i be able to use this character?

You have to use the template from this forum

Okay, if you're gonna use this character, you would need a proper Race. You can say you were experimented on IN your character history, but you still belong to something specific.

http://www.bleachdynasty.com/templates-f38/ < - Visit

We have lots of Races, and within them templates you can fill up for your character.

By the looks of it, your character seems like a SOUL? (a plus or whatever they call it)


Now i read most of your app, it consists of Canon characters (Characters from Bleach)

Sadly were a non canon rp, so we only accept custom characters, im not saying that your character is a canon, but your history shouldn't involve canon characters, but you can add custom BD characters for them.

right so what i need to do is get rid the canon charter's and put in random names to represents squads, pick one yer races and make few small changes i should be alright?

Yes, that should be fine