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    Falling Apart

    JennyReika
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    Post by JennyReika Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:15 am

    This isnt my best piece of work, but, it is a sincere piece of work. It is everything that came out of me at light speed.

    I wrote this poem in about 8 minutes. I had so much on my mind, it just all spewed out of me, and I just had to type something out before I lost it.

    So, these are all my current feelings, sprawled down on the PC for all to see...
    Enjoy? lol.

    Falling Apart

    If you knew I was falling...
    Would you take the fall with me?
    If you knew I was in pain...
    Would you suffer the pain within me?

    I thought I knew,
    Just what I meant...
    That every second was special,
    More like another day spent.

    It happened so fast,
    But it took so long for me.
    Now that we're here,
    I dont think you can see.

    I am defeated.
    I have already lost.
    Yet, I'm not giving up.
    Willing to pay the cost.

    I want your arms around me.
    I want every single part you will give.
    How I want for you.
    And I want you to live.

    What can I do...
    You dont understand.
    The love that I want.
    Slipping through my hands.

    I cant have you near me.
    I cant have you close.
    Touching me everywhere.
    Needing you the most.

    I gasp to feel your body.
    I yearn to feel your heart.
    Completely inside of me.
    Until we fall apart.

    I try to stop thinking.
    I try to rip out my mind.
    But I dont care about anything else.
    Because love is truly blind.

    I dont care about anybody,
    Who I hurt, or what it takes.
    All I care about is me and you,
    And how my body aches.

    I didnt write this for substance,
    I dont write it for pride.
    I write it simply to say what I need,
    And I need you by my side.

    I'm not one for hoping.
    And I dont care to wish.
    But if I could have anything,
    It would just be this.

    I wish there was nothing,
    And nothing ever existed.
    Just you and me,
    Alone in this instant.

    This small fraction of time...
    Stopped for one small breath.
    Feeling you in me,
    I'd take to my death.

    Piece by piece.
    Ive fallen apart.
    Begging for your love.
    Pleading for your heart.

    And now I'm in pain...
    Are you suffering with me?
    And now I have fallen...
    Have you fallen with me?
    waterfallwings
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    Post by waterfallwings Thu Aug 06, 2009 4:44 am

    Oh.. I understand it!!
    It's a really nice poem.. I could never think of something as great as this. o:
    Please make more, I think I will really like your type of poetry. :D

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